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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lack of Freeway Prescience

    I was a little bit hard to understand... but I think you were comparing him or his personality to a car/driver that was out of control? Sort of? That's my ...

    Jan 14, 2008
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Airborn and Skybreaker

    I've been obsessed with that movie for almost forever, and now I'm really into these books. Personally, I think that Airborn and Skybreaker would make really great movies. But, only ...

    Dec 4, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse

    Personally, I thought these books were wonderfull. Although, my mother is more obsessed with them than I am... ^^ Stephenie Meyer must have done her homework, since the 'vampire myth' ...

    Dec 4, 2007
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Sneak Peak at my Novel Under the Mountain!

    I agree with Sokool. Perhaps you should try introducing the characters gradually, instead of referring to them by their name when they first speak. You had a lot of description, ...

    Aug 2, 2007
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Keys To The Kingdom

    I thought these books were great. In fact, I just did a book review on them for my English class. I do agree that they are pretty confusing, especially for ...

    May 13, 2007


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